Aqa Biol5 Essay About Myself

The mark scheme for essay marking.

Four skill areas will be marked: scientific content, breadth of knowledge, relevance and quality of
language. The following descriptors will form a basis for marking.

Scientific Content (maximum 16 marks)
Category Mark Descriptor
16
Good
14
Most of the material reflects a comprehensive
understanding of the principles involved and a
knowledge of factual detail fully in keeping with a
programme of A-level study. Some material, however,
may be a little superficial. Material is accurate and free
from fundamental errors but there may be minor errors
which detract from the overall accuracy.
12
10
Average
8
A significant amount of the content is of an appropriate
depth, reflecting the depth of treatment expected from a
programme of A-level study. Generally accurate with
few, if any, fundamental errors. Shows a sound
understanding of the key principles involved.
6
4
Poor 2
Material presented is largely superficial and fails to
reflect the depth of treatment expected from a
programme of A-level study. If greater depth of
knowledge is demonstrated, then there are many
fundamental errors.
0

Breadth of Knowledge (maximum 3 marks)
Mark Descriptor
3 A balanced account making reference to most areas that might realistically be covered
on an A-level course of study.
2 A number of aspects covered but a lack of balance. Some topics essential to an
understanding at this level not covered.
1 Unbalanced account with all or almost all material based on a single aspect.
0 Material entirely irrelevant or too limited in quantity to judge.

Relevance (maximum 3 marks)
Mark Descriptor
3 All material presented is clearly relevant to the title. Allowance should be made for
judicious use of introductory material.
2 Material generally selected in support of title but some of the main content of the essay
is of only marginal relevance.
1 Some attempt made to relate material to the title but considerable amounts largely
irrelevant.
0 Material entirely irrelevant or too limited in quantity to judge.

Quality of language (maximum 3 marks)
Mark Descriptor
3 Material is logically presented in clear, scientific English. Technical terminology has
been used effectively and accurately throughout.
2 Account is logical and generally presented in clear, scientific English. Technical
terminology has been used effectively and is usually accurate.
1 The essay is generally poorly constructed and often fails to use an appropriate scientific
style and terminology to express ideas.
0 Material entirely irrelevant or too limited in quantity to judge.

Кроме того, он был фанатом всевозможных прибамбасов, и его автомобиль стал своего рода витриной: он установил в нем компьютерную систему глобального позиционирования, замки, приводящиеся в действие голосом, пятиконечный подавитель радаров и сотовый телефонфакс, благодаря которому всегда мог принимать сообщения на автоответчик.

На номерном знаке авто была надпись МЕГАБАЙТ в обрамлении сиреневой неоновой трубки. Ранняя юность Грега Хейла не была омрачена криминальными историями, поскольку он провел ее в Корпусе морской пехоты США, где и познакомился с компьютером.

Он стал лучшим программистом корпуса, и перед ним замаячила перспектива отличной военной карьеры. Но за два дня до окончания третьего боевого дежурства в его будущем произошел резкий зигзаг.

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